The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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The table compares the
salaries
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of tutors who worked in secondary or high schools in five different nations, namely Australia,Denmark,Luxembourg,Korea,and Japan in 2009.
It is clear that
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teachers
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earned the highest
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in Luxembourg;
moreover
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, in Korea,
teachers
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had to spend the longest time to reach maximum
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. As for Denmark, there was the smallest increase in the tutors'
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. Looking at the information in more detail, among the five countries, in Luxembourg,
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had the highest
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at US$80,000 when they were beginners, and they had to spend 30
years
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to reach the maximum figure of US$139,000. In other countries, the
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at the beginning were between US$34,600 and US$47,000. It can be seen that
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needed more time to earn the highest
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in both Korea and Japan. The former took 37
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, and the latter took 34
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. In terms of Australia and Denmark, the table shows that their
teachers
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could reach top
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more quickly, in 9
years
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and 8
years
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, teachers, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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