The bar graph illustrates information regarding the degree of polluted
air
Use synonyms
of
4 different Change preposition
in
country
depicted in 3 sectors in 2012. Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that China ranked first in all 3 factors, Linking Words
while
America can see transport as a significant reason Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
air
contamination Use synonyms
while
Japan’s main cause is factories or other industry facilities which both ranked top in each two parts.
As to the detail, the distribution of Linking Words
china
in Capitalize word
China
air
corruption is highly ranked, with all 3 parts reaching more than 50PPM compared to Use synonyms
other
3 countries. Correct article usage
the other
The industrial
facilities Correct article usage
Industrial
such
as factories and construction Linking Words
figures
a significant majority of contamination of 80PPM followed by vehicles including public transportation of 70PPM and 60PPM of electricity which recorded more than twice as many as the second-ranked U.S. When it comes to other nations, U.S’s electronic and industrial situation affected Change the verb form
figure
quality
of earth atmosphere around 30PPM, Add an article
the quality
while
Japan Linking Words
show
similar in transport, much less by 10PPM in electronic consumption.
Looking at the figures for Australia, we can see Australia as an eco-friendly country with its degree of harmfulness to Change the verb form
shows
air
recorded under 20PPM in 2012.Use synonyms
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