You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
I am writing a letter to express my gratitude about the cookery
course
that I have enrolled in for the last
6 months. Yes, I enjoyed being in this
cookery school
because I learned about basic cooking skills. Besides
that, I also
learned how to make mother sauces, which is the key to becoming a chef.
However
, I was so fortunate to join your cute Malt school
. I had to learn a lot of theology and skills to become a chef. For example
, I learned how to shape a knife and how to identify food poisoning.
Therefore
, I am asking if your school
could be offered more baking. The reasons why I raise this
idea? Because it could help other people who are interested in studying banking and it could be beneficial to your school
by seeing more people enroll
.
I would like to suggest that your Change the spelling
enrol
school
offer a course
on banking. I have always been interested in learning how to bake bread, cakes, and pastries, and I think this
would be a great addition to your course
offering.
Thank you again for the wonderful experience. I look forward to attending another course
at your school
soon.
Sincerely,Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion for coherence and cohesion.
Coherence & Cohesion
Keep each paragraph focused on a single idea for clarity.
Task Achievement
Consider starting your letter with a proper greeting and end with an appropriate closing statement for a suitable structure and tone.
Task Achievement
Be specific about your suggestions and experiences for a stronger task response.
Coherence & Cohesion
You shared your experiences and showed appreciation, which connects well with the reader.
Task Achievement
Your suggestion for a new course shows engagement and provides constructive feedback.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.