The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
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The given charts depict the expenditure and income of a children's charity based in the United States over a year.
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, it can be seen that the vast majority of
revenue
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sources is donated food
while
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program services hold the lion's share in expenditures.
To begin
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with, the overwhelming majority of
revenue
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sources is donated food, a massive 86.6%.
Next,
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the percentage of community contributions accounts for 10.4% total of
revenue
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sources, followed by the figure for program
revenue
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takes up 2.2%.
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, the proportion of investment income and government grants are similar at 0.2%. Moving on to the other categories, the percentage of program services ranks first with 95.8% in total expenditure. Followed by the figure for fundraising and management and general make up 2.6% and 1.8% respectively.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • charity
  • non-profit organization
  • funds
  • revenue
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising
  • expenditure
  • allocations
  • administrative costs
  • program services
  • beneficiaries
  • financial year
  • breakdown
  • percentage
  • portion
  • sector
  • philanthropy
  • budgeting
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