At the present time, many population prefer to converse with each other by using social networks and phones to call because of this traditional aspects of communication are becoming smaller today. The majority of individuals imagine that this is reducing public's ability to interface correctly when they are meeting in person in real life. From my point of view, I agree that nation need to associate in real life without the Internet.

At the present time, many

population

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prefer to converse with each other by using social networks and phones to call because of

this

traditional aspects of communication are becoming smaller today. The majority of individuals imagine that

this

is reducing

public's

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ability to interface correctly when they are meeting in person in real life. From my point of view, I agree that

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need to associate in real life without the Internet. Nowadays, we are living in a world where technology is well-developed and it creates perfect conditions for individuals to communicate by using social media without a personal meeting. When humans are messaging together, they will not be able to show each other their real emotions, as in real communication. Many

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send notes to their partners without hesitation or can ask some questions and they can communicate easily without seeing each other,

this

will suit them.

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, when they see each other in person they cannot communicate without hesitation like online. Because they are used to communicating via the Internet and when they meet, it will be awkward for them to talk to each other on various topics that interest them.

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, if individuals need to communicate urgently, but they can not meet together, in

such

cases, they will need the media or call them on the phone to talk faster. It can help interface faster each other everywhere and at every time.

For instance

, some society live abroad but their relatives live in another country they cannot meet together in real life every day.

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, social sites help them communicate and meet via digital conservation and the net. In conclusion, many

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would like to associate via networks, forgetting how to talk better face to face. I think we need to talk to each other frequently and not forget how better spend time with our partners in person.