Many people believe that social networking sites ike Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree. sive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

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DIGITAL
MEDIA
IS PLAYED A HIGH PREMIUM ON THE MODERN WORLD.AS IT IS ENUNCIATED A SECTION OF SOCIETY
HARBOUR
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THE BELIEF THAT SOCIAL
MEDIA
IS AN APOCALYPTIC DEMON. ON DRAWING A DIALECTIC
PERPECTIVE
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PERSPECTIVE
AND
QULITATIVE
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QUANTITATIVE
META-SYNTHETIC METHODOLOGY, I WOULD PEN HOW SOCIAL IMPACTS OM INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY.ALBEIT THERE IS DICHOTOMY OF VIEWS ON
THIS
CONCERN , I HARBOUR THE BELIEF THAT
THIS
APPPRENSION IS TOTALLY UNWARRENTED .I PROVIDE
AN
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INTERESTING JUSTIFICATIONS AND
EMEPLIFY
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EXPLAIN
ESSENCIAL ELEMANTS
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ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS
TO JUSTIFY MY PERSPECTIVE.
FIRSTLY
,THERE ARE
UNDEINABLE
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UNDENIABLE
FACTS THAT,SOCIAL NETWORKING PLACES A HIGH
PREIMIUM
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PREMIUM
ON SOCIETY IN
CURRENT
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THE CURRENT
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WPORLD
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WORLD
.IT PROVIDES A LOT OF PROS TO HUMAN BEINGS ,
FOR INSTANCE
,STAY CONNECT WITH PEER GROUPS AND
SHARE
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ALL THE THINGS LIKE PHOTOS ,
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AND DOVUMENTS
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DOVUMENTS
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DOCUMENTS
,
AS WELL AS
,WE CAN SEE MAJORITY OF INDIVIDUALS START THEIR OWN BUSINESSES ONLINE AND THEY CHOOSE INSTAGRAM AND FACEBOOK AS
ADVERTISE
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TOOL
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.NOT ONLY THAT,
SOCIA
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SOCIAL
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MEDIA
INFLUENCES BUT
ALSO
MAKE
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MAKES
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THOUNSANDS
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THOUSANDS
OF MILLIONS FROM
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TOK
.
FOR INSTANCE
,SINGERS EARN MONEY FROM RELEASING THEIR FRESH SONGS TO
YOU TUBE
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IN ONE NIGHT.IN FACT,
IN
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DURING
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THE CORONA PANDEMIC ,
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TOK
HELPS TO RELAX MINDS AND SPEND A FUN TIME WITH FAMILY BY MAKING
CONTECS
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CONTENT
.
MOREOVER
,THESE COMPANIES INCREASE DAY BY DAY
BEACAUSE
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BECAUSE
OF THAT, OCCUPATIONS RELATED TO THAT HAVE
UPWARD
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AN UPWARD
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TREND.
MOREOVER
,
BUSSINESS
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BUSINESS
COME TO THE MARKET .THESE POSITIVE IMPACTS
HELPS
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HELP
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TO ECONOMY GROWTH OF
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THE ANATION
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ANATION
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.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, SOCIAL
MEDIA
HAS A VARIETY OF CONS.A
LOTBOF
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LOT OF
SOCIAL
MEDIA
ABUSE IS HAPPENING IN
CURRENT
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WORLD.
FUTHERMORE
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FURTHERMORE
,OFFSPRING
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ARE ADDICT
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ADDICT
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TO
USE SOCAIL
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SOCIAL
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NETWORKING
SIDES
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WITHOUT THEIR
ADULTS
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ADULT'S
ADULTS'
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ADVICES
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ADVICE
.MOST IMPORTANTLY ,HACKING THREATS ,
ADDICTION
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AND ADDICTION
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OF
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TO
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SOCAL
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SOCIAL
MEDIA
.SHARING WRONG INFORMATION AND
DICTRACT
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DISTRACT
FROM STUDIES ARE MAJOR IMPACTS ON
SOCITEY
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SOCIETY
.
FOR INSTANCE
, A
TIK
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TIKTOK
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TOK
CELEBRITY
ATTEND
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A PARTY AND SHE WANTED TO DO
TIK
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TIKTOK
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TOK
WITH ONE OF HER FRIENDS.AFTER THAT SHE SHOOT HER BEST FRIEND TO MAKE
A
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CONTENT WITHOUT KNOWING
THAT IS
REAL
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A REAL
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GUN.AFTER THAT INCIDENT SHE MADE MILLIONS OF FOLLOWERS.NOT ONLY THAT SOME ONLINE
BUSUNESS
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BUSINESSES
LIKE TRADING BUT
ALSO
FAKE SOMETIMES BECAUSE OF HACKERS. TO SOME
UP
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, SOCIAL
MEDIA
HAS MERITS AND DEMERITS.ANY INDIVIDUAL, REGARDLESS OF THEIR BIASES VIES ON
THIS
CONCERN, WOULD BE ABLE TO RESPECT ,MY IDEA AND ATTITUDE BY
EXAMIMNG
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EXAMINING
THE RUDIMENTARY CONUNDRUM AND OTHER ALTERNATIVE PREPONDERANT RESULTS.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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