The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present world, the way to obtain
knowledges
isn’t Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
constrain
to Wrong verb form
constrained
book
and school. Nowadays, learning through Wrong verb form
books
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
is much more popular. It is agreed that Capitalize word
Internet
one
day education will digitalize to an
extent that Correct article usage
the
books
are replaced. This
will be elaborate
by discussing the differences between Correct your spelling
elaborated
portable
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the portable
a portable
device
and physical Fix the agreement mistake
devices
books
, and the
how Correct article usage
apply
paper
books
have contribute
to environmental issues.
Change the verb form
contributed
Firstly
, the internet
has several advantages compared to books
. Internet
provides Add an article
The Internet
enormous
amount of know-how Add an article
an enormous
while
books
contain limited knowledges
in limited pages. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
In other words
, books
take up weight as well as
volume, it requires
a considerable amount of Correct subject-verb agreement
require
spaces
for storage, Fix the agreement mistake
space
while
Internet
simply puts its Correct article usage
the Internet
informations
on the web and Change the wording
information
pieces of information
one
can access to
it merely through Change preposition
apply
website
. Correct article usage
a website
Moreover
, Internet
surpasses limitations in real life, which means, it is possible to search for any resources regardless of Correct article usage
the Internet
ones
position and situation. Change to a genitive case
one's
Thus
, it is clear that
Internet
is Correct article usage
the Internet
more
preferred considering Correct quantifier usage
apply
portability
, efficiency, and the unlimited resources that Correct pronoun usage
its portability
Internet
could possibly bring.
Correct article usage
the Internet
Secondly
, deforestation has always been a serious issue that is
strongly connected to climate change. According to
researches
, there is Fix the agreement mistake
research
average
Correct article usage
an average
one
tree being cut down every second in the world. What’s worse, Change preposition
of one
paper
happens to be one
of the main products produced from trees. However
, with the internet
, we came up with a new way of storing our precious information. Therefore
, books
will be less needed when human collects information online. Besides
, unlike paper made
Add a hyphen
paper-made
books
that will break down after decades, there is
no time limitations to Change the verb form
are
Internet
! Add an article
the Internet
Thus
, books
creates
environmental concerns Change the verb form
create
while
Internet
provides a solution to solve Add an article
the Internet
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
To sum up
, It can’t be emphasize
more that the Wrong verb form
emphasised
internet
possesses of
several Change preposition
apply
advantage
that Change to a plural noun
advantages
books
can never exceed. Internet
elevates our way of learning, we can learn whenever and wherever we want. Correct article usage
The Internet
Also
, It is more logical and economical to choose Internet
over Add an article
the Internet
paper
. It is predicted that digitalization would
soon be evolving the world.Wrong verb form
will
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