The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a figure illustrating percentages of positive responses to various aspects of a university by a 5-year interval in 2000, 2005 and 2010. An interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that printing resources and teaching facilities at the university were the most widely enjoyed
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since at least 84% and 77% of students were satisfied with them respectively.
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field, meanwhile in 2000 was electronic resources as approximately half of the
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45% commented it positively.
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, after merely a ten-year period, in 2010 it succeeded in gaining twofold positive at 88% responses . In stark contrast,
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, modules presented by the university were unpleasant on the part of students
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the fact that not only just a third of students ratted it to be proper in 2000,
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declined to 27% in 2010
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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