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Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, online education growing using artificial
intelligence
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 and
computers
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 happens because of the benefits of
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 development
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 as fast research or having a large source of
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 and it is a negative growth. First of all, the pros of using AI Technology or modern devices like having a big source of
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 for searching are undeniable.
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, when using robots in daily work and studying to search for the information you need or get more knowledge, it can help those jobs get easier by using them.
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, ChatGPT is one of the best applications which are used to search the
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 it can answer all of the questions you have.
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, pupils may become reliant on
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 and artificial
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 to continue. To put it another way, when students are having trouble with their studies, they turn to
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 or artificial
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 (AI) to help them find the answers.
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, today's students are usually rushing to check up on anything on the internet or use ChatGPT to create an essay for them without doing any research beforehand. In conclusion, artificial
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 and
computers
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 can help people find the information they need quickly with their vast
data
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 resources. But it will be a bad development if they depend on it.

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task achievement
Try to provide a more balanced discussion on how AI can enhance learning experiences, mentioning both positive and negative aspects to fully address the question.
coherence & cohesion
For a more coherent essay, aim to clearly link your ideas and paragraphs together with connective phrases and transition words.
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In your introduction, explicitly state your viewpoint to give the reader a clear understanding of your stance on the topic.
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To strengthen your task achievement, ensure that you fully develop your argument with detailed examples and explanations.
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You've provided relevant examples such as the use of ChatGPT, which helps illustrate your points.
coherence & cohesion
The structure of your essay, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, aids in understanding your argument.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning
  • adaptive learning
  • learner's pace
  • AI-driven analytics
  • targeted instruction
  • interactive content
  • virtual reality
  • automate
  • administrative tasks
  • human interaction
  • social skills
  • data privacy
  • over-reliance
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
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