The maps illustrate the changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010.

The maps show how Shipsmouth developed over a 20-year period from 1995 to 2010.
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,
while
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there were significant changes in facilities, the
city
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centre
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and the station remained at the original site. Looking into detail, regarding the big changes, the trees in the southwest of the
city
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centre
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were cut down to make way for new apartment blocks and
also
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just below it the factory was demolished to build a shopping
centre
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. On the waterfront to the east, opposite the
city
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centre
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, a new football stadium was constructed and opposite the station, to the east, the trees were cleared and replaced by an airport.
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, the houses on the right of the
city
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centre
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were demolished to erect skyscrapers. In terms of small changes,
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the old station in the north remained unchanged, a new one was built in the south of Shipsmouth. The road which
run
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runs
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through the
city
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centre
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pedestrianised
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was pedestrianised
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and the church in the southeast was converted into a pub

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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