The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the process of making compost by recycling organic waste.
According to
the figure, it is clear that
there are five stages before the compost is ready to be used. The process begins with preparing the container and ends with getting fertilizer.
Firstly
, a plastic container which is at least two cubic metres is penetrated to let the air in the container flow in and out freely. After that, the waste including newspaper, grass and food is filled in the vessel, each layer must be 15 centimetres thick. Moreover
, Nitrogen and hot water will be poured in together in the third stage.
In the fourth stage, close the cap of the vessel with any materials and wait for the components inside react
with each other. The heat from the boiled water and reaction will be coming out through the penetrated holes. After six months, the garden fertilizer is ready to be used in the garden.Fix the infinitive
to react
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