the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015

the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015
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The bar chart illustrates information about the number of households by their annual income in the United States between 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the income earner in the 100,000 or more
range
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had the highest in 2007 and 2015.
While
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25,000-49,999 was the top in 2011 and the 75,000-99,999
range
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was the lowest in 3 years.
According to
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the 100,000 plus
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, in 2007 starting at around 30
million
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which
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it decreased minimally to just over 25
million
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in 2011 and it decreased moderately to the peak of
household
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households
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just under 35
million
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.
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,
the
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less than 25,000 and 25,000-49,999 were similar movements
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the number of households was nearly 25
million
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in 2007 and it climbed steadily to approximately 30
million
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in 2011 after that it fell to just under 30% in 2015.
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, the 50,000-74,999 were as slow as the 75,000-99,999 in 3 years.
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, the 50,000-74,999
range
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remained the same at around 20
million
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and the 75,000-99,999 stayed at 15
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words range, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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