The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sprots between 2008 and 2014 and the second one shows the number of children who paticipated in three sports in Britain over the same period.
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The first chart depicts the average expenditure on
children
's sports
each month by British parents while
the second illustrates the number
of children
taking part in three sports
in Britain at the same time.
Overall
, it can be seen that the money spent on children
's sports
witnessed a gradual rise while
the number
of children
taking part in three sports
experienced growth in the period time in question. Besides
, football was the most popular sport.
To begin
with, in 2008 the number
of football participants started at around 8 million
children
and it then
relatively remained stable in 2010. However
, the figure significantly rose to 9 million
children
in 2012 and continuously went up in 2014. If we look at swimming, the trend is similar. The number
of children
opting into swimming began at around 2 million
and the figure then
sustainably increased and reached around 3.75 million
children
. Lastly
, in the first two years, the number
of children
who participated in athletics was unchanged at under 1 million
but it then
remarkably increased to 5 million
in 2012. However
, the figure experienced a slight decline at
around 4.5 Change preposition
to
million
in 2014.
Moving on to the other categories, there was a substantial growth in the amount of money spent on children
's sports
by British parents each month which started at 20 pounds and peaked at 33 pounds in 2014.Submitted by lethithut123 on
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