Some people think that old buildings should be protected, while other believe that they should be replaced by newer buildings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Historically, governments have proposed to re-design cities massively in order to create megalopolis.

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belief

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by many

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, many others argue ancient buildings should be repaired

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represent

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history. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and explain why I firmly believe that both

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of design should

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among all architectural designs. To start with, there are many advantages of building cutting-edge either skyscrapers or middle-height constructions because it shows the

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advancements

advancement

in many fields

such

as

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, engineering, and technology.

Besides

, nowadays many innovative materials to withstand natural disasters like earthquakes have been created.

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, In Miami, where

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hurricaines

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hurricanes

have

whiped

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whipped

this

coast, have been built houses with high-quality waterproofing and stronger concrete and cementum.

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, there was a decrease in mortality and

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morbidity

mobility

as a consequence

of these events.

On the other hand

, landmark buildings represent our

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and ancestors.

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, many constructions

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under conditions in which humans had to deal with diseases and violence because of

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slavery in times of

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dynasties

and bourgeois classes.

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, The Canal of Panama is one of the main historical badges

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worldwide

leading to

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shorter distances between The Atlantic and The Pacific

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,

however

over its construction hundreds of people died as

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of yellow fever. Currently, there are two parts of The Canal in which the oldest one has been restructured

instead

of replaced.

To sum up

, both

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of

insfrastructures

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infrastructures

infrastructure

are crucial because an equilibrium is required.

Nevertheless

, human beings should take advantage of technology,

however

, there are many old

desing

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designs

that are

considerated

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considered

as relics.