The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
The graph illustrates the
number
of visitors who travel to a Caribbean island between the years 2010 to 2017. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in millions.
Use synonyms
According to
the figure, it can be seen that the Linking Words
number
of travellers is getting higher every year. Use synonyms
However
, most of them prefer to stay on the island until the Linking Words
last
two years of the period Linking Words
which
they wish to spend their days on ships.
In the beginning, the total of tourists started at 1.0 and continuously increased to 1.5 in 2012 before surging to nearly 2.8 in 2015. It remained constant in the year 2015 through the year 2016 before it overwhelmingly jumped to 3.5 in 2017.
In 2010, people which was about 0.7 loved to stay on the island Change preposition
in which
while
visiting and Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
hovered the same in 2011 Use synonyms
while
the ones staying on the ships began at 0.2 before rising to 0.5. After that, the Linking Words
number
of both choices noticeably separated again until between 2015 and 2016 when the off-shore choice surpassed the on-shore by 0.2 Use synonyms
as well as
they ended the period at 2 and 1.5 respectively.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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