The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The graph illustrates the prices of three items
such
Correct quantifier usage
apply
as
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apply
Copper
, Nickel
, and Zinc every month in 2014. In general, there was a dramatical
fluctuation in three metals from January to December.
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dramatic
In
the beginning of January 2014, Change the preposition
At
Copper
experienced a downward trend from 6% to 4% in February. In addition
, Copper
and Nickel
had a downward trend which noticeably decreased proportion by 1% in only five months from January to May. The lowest percentage of price was Nickel
by -3% in June. Although
, it increased gradually for Correct word choice
However
next
month and remained steady respectively between July and September. Correct article usage
the next
Otherwise
, both Copper
and Nickel
jumped sharply in November around 1,5%.
Conversely
, in comparison with the price of Zinc, which witnessed a gradual drop to -1% in June, the price remained steadily similar with
Change preposition
to
Copper
and Nickel
followed by July, August, and September. On the contrary
, it increased slowly between November and December.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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