The graph below shows the number of undergraduate students in thousands in four countries between 1995 and 2015.

The graph below shows the number of undergraduate students in thousands in four countries between 1995 and 2015.
The chart shows undergraduate student numbers in thousands in 4 nations from 1961 to 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
upward trends can be seen in four lines.
However
, Singapore gained around 25 thousand
of
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students in
this
50-year period which was the biggest increase above others. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that there were some slight shifts in Thailand during the first 30
years
, and
then
the line soared dramatically. In the
last
20
years
, the numbers almost doubled. Compared to Thailand, Singapore had significant changes in
this
50
years
. The number of Filipinos went up very quickly at first.
Subsequently
, it ascended slowly. In the end, the numbers stayed at 15 thousand. Malaysia's figures always rose slowly, but in the
years
between 1981 and 1991, the figures increased a lot. In the next
years
, the growth was steady.
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