In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

In the light of proliferation of

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, it may indeed be true to claim the

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is increasingly becoming the focus of governments and citizens around the globe. There is a public debate that the government is spending a large amount of money improving

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. In my opinion, it is quite difficult to decide whether to support or reject the statement above because each system has its good and bad points. The essay will examine the pros and cons of

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trend. What I put in priority is the merits which the

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brings about.

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, it is vitally important that the

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plays an important role in the development of any nation. Reliable and high-speed

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helps companies to improve their work productivity,

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, increasing their profits. A company could suffer from the loss of customers

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poor

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connections. Another factor is the authority organization

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function of high-

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to

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the amounts of population by online storage and easier to take individuals's

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. Despite the

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benefits, there exist some demerits that should be taken into consideration. The first and most obvious demerit is that there are other important sectors that require government money. Education and health care are more vital than

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because they bring immediate advantages

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ordinary people. There are millions of people who do not have the opportunity to

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basic education or medical services.

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, the government should allocate more money to education and health care

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of to improvement of

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. From what has been analyzed, it is obvious that the

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of

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not able to compare with the advantages.