Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It cannot be denied that nowadays there are several improvements occurring in the transportation system. it is believed that
pollution
created by Use synonyms
vehicles
can be reduced with financial help from the government in the advancement of public transportation Use synonyms
as well as
by the reduction in public transit fares. I partially agree with the given scenario.
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To begin
with, the development of mass transit will increase the utilization of public Linking Words
transport
among the population which automatically reduces the need for personal travel. Use synonyms
However
, lower transit rates will attract the public to commute by bus or train. Linking Words
Consequently
, there will be less traffic on the roads which lead to less Linking Words
pollution
Use synonyms
as well as
a decrease in the need for fossil fuels.
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on the other hand
, either less expense and improved public conveyance will drop the air Linking Words
pollution
or usage of petrol in Use synonyms
the
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apply
vehicles
but there Use synonyms
is
the majority of people will always prefer their own Unnecessary verb
apply
vehicles
. Use synonyms
Although
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,
there will be fewer charges for public Remove the comma
apply
transport
it can not be available in an emergency time. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Public Linking Words
transport
can only be available for specific hours and on particular routes. Use synonyms
Therefore
, It will be Linking Words
inconvenience
for the people who live in the countryside where public Replace the word
inconvenient
transport
is hardly available.
In conclusion, It can be analyzed that despite the monetary assistance from legislators will provide help to decrease Use synonyms
pollution
the movement of individuals cannot be limited to public transportation because of some limitations like time, area and personal preferences. Use synonyms
Therefore
, higher authorities should find some other methods to maintain a balance between the usage of public Linking Words
transport
and personal Use synonyms
vehicles
to reduce Use synonyms
pollution
.Use synonyms
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