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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to apply for the Librarian post as advertised on the school website. As a student of
this
 University pursuing a degree in English Literature
in addition
 to my acquired skills, I am confident that I am best suited for
this
 post. First and foremost, I have developed the necessary skills whilst holding a similar job at my High School. During my Junior and Senior years, as a volunteer librarian. I made sure that all books were
aranged
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arranged
according to
 title, genre, and the name of the author.
Additionally
, my love for books will enable me to do
this
 job to the best of my ability. As an avid reader, I read at least two novels a week. Most of which was borrowed from
this
 library.
Therefore
, I am very familiar with the layout of the library in question. It is my
believe
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 that you will not find a
better suited
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 candidate for
this
 post. It is my hope to hear from you soon with positive news. Yours sincerely, John Brown
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General
Ensure that you proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and improve fluency.
task achievement
Expand on your relevant skills and experience with specific examples to strengthen your application.
coherence cohesion
Consider dividing your letter into more distinct paragraphs to address each point more clearly.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear and logical structure, effectively addressing all required points.
task achievement
You used a suitable writing tone that is polite and professional.
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