The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for the Librarian post as advertised on the school website. As a student of

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University pursuing a degree in English Literature

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to my acquired skills, I am confident that I am best suited for

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post. First and foremost, I have developed the necessary skills whilst holding a similar job at my High School. During my Junior and Senior years, as a volunteer librarian. I made sure that all books were

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title, genre, and the name of the author.

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, my love for books will enable me to do

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job to the best of my ability. As an avid reader, I read at least two novels a week. Most of which was borrowed from

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library.

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, I am very familiar with the layout of the library in question. It is my

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that you will not find a

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candidate for

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post. It is my hope to hear from you soon with positive news. Yours sincerely, John Brown

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Ensure that you proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and improve fluency.

task achievement

Expand on your relevant skills and experience with specific examples to strengthen your application.

coherence cohesion

Consider dividing your letter into more distinct paragraphs to address each point more clearly.

coherence cohesion

Your letter has a clear and logical structure, effectively addressing all required points.

task achievement

You used a suitable writing tone that is polite and professional.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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