the chart below show the average cost of month contract for four different mobiles in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euros per month.

the chart below show the average cost of month contract for four different mobiles in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euros per month.
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The given chart illustrates the total
cost
of the monthly contract for 4 varied cellphones in certain European countries namely Domo, Lex, sim TX and Alpha between
January
and September 2002, measured in
euros
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the average
cost
of Demo, Lex and Alpha devices saw upward trends whilst the figure for sim TX ,
in contrast
, declined. In
January
, the fee for demo devices at 15
euros
per month
then
suddenly went up by 20
euros
and maintained
this
position from one month to June. Surprisingly, it still dramatically increased to 25
euros
but
then
mildly decreased at over 23
euros
, ranked second throughout the
period
in spite of ranking first at the first of the
period
.
Conversely
, the average
cost
of sim TX was lowest during the
6months
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6 months
from
January
by approximately 5
euros
, but from June it rapidly increased to 25
euros
ranked first
at the end
of the
period
. From
January
to May, the
cost
of Lex and Alpha devices had the same pattern
then
they saw an approximately same at about 12
euros
. The
cost
of Lex
then
gradually increased to 19
euros
,
by contrast
, the figure for Alpha massively went down by over 8
euros
, ranked lowest throughout the
period
.
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