Many museums charge for admission while few others are free. Do the advantages of charging a fee outweigh its disadvantages?

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seeing

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that large numbers of

museums

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acquired admission dues;

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, some of the

museums

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are not restricted to

pay

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paying

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fee

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fees

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for entry into the

museum

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. In

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essay, I will weigh up the benefits and drawbacks

about

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this

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phenomenon with pertinent notions and will be explicated

further

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in detail. To commence, with the pre-eminent benefits of charging entry

fee

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by

enlarge

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museums

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.

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trend has innumerable infinite positive aspects to maintain and retain the worth of

museums

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. To be more precise, in

this

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way

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it will not be only the responsibility of

government

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to feel abandoned to spend on historical placements to keep regulate and manage them.

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that, citizens will visit each side of the

museum

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with

concentration

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on

single

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visit, when they know they have to pay it for the next time.

A pupils

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are

standout

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example of it, they

visits

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by submitting trip charges to the school authority for the

museum

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trips.

These

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money is

lucarative

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lucrative

for the

museum

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administration.

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,

museums

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without being charged are always filled with laymen, and there is no

any

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apply

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security and stable management. The condition of those

museums

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are miserable

,

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and are used only for picnic spots rather than educational or historical purposes.

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, ordinary people only visit to spend their free time without knowing the value of

museum

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features and physical aspects. Specifically in Lahore

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museum

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, which is free of cost for everyone,

it

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is

alway

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always

occupied

with

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by

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huge numbers of people.

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, it has lost the original values of available handicrafts and monuments. It has waned the history of cultural heritage.

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, these both above mentioned

phenomenon

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phenomena

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the advantages are exceeded rather than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. Countless benefits are found in those

museums

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who

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that

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charged

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charge

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to

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apply

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visitors to regulate the

values

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value

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of

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museums

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museums'

museum's

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features than

to

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in

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those

who

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that

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do not charge and

seems

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seem

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like recreational

place

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places

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only.