The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

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the number of shops closed and opened in a specific country between

2011and

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2011 and

2018.

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number of

closure

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closures

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happened in the

year

2015

however

,

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the opening

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opening

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openings

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was

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less

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by the end of the period. On one hand , openings of retail shops

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around 8500 in the

year

2011 but drastically

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in the next

year

2012 to 4000 and stood up to 6000 in

the

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2014 , but stable between 2015 and 2017 4000, before it

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to 3000 in 2018.

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,

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of

stores

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closures

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approximately 6200 in the

year

2011, slightly

drop

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in

following

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year

and

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to 7100 in 2013 but

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decline in 2015 from 6500 to around 300 . Increase 5100 in the next

year

,

maintaine

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maintained

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stead between 2016 to till

end

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of 2018 with 5100.