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The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
#shops #country
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illustrate
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 the number of shops closed and opened in a specific country between
2011and
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2011 and
 2018.
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, it can seen that
highest
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 number of
closure
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closures
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 happened in the
year
 2015
however
,
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the opening
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opening
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openings
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was
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less
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 by the end of the period. On one hand , openings of retail shops
was
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 around 8500 in the
year
 2011 but drastically
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 in the next
year
 2012 to 4000 and stood up to 6000 in
the
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2014 , but stable between 2015 and 2017 4000, before it
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 to 3000 in 2018.
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 ,
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a number
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 of
stores
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 closures
is
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 approximately 6200 in the
year
 2011, slightly
drop
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 in
following
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year
 and
rise
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 to 7100 in 2013 but
significant
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 decline in 2015 from 6500 to around 300 . Increase 5100 in the next
year
,
maintaine
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maintained
maintain
 stead between 2016 to till
end
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 of 2018 with 5100.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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