You are a football player, but you have to leave the team for a while, write a letter to your team-mate and say: - why you have to leave, - how much you love the football team, - when you are coming back.

#football #player #team #team-mate #love

Dear All, I hope you find

this

letter on radiant health and the best of spirits.I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I shall not be able to play for our team as I was hit by a car I am not able to move and may have to rest for the next couple of months. You know how much I love soccer. We both started playing football in the

last

8-9 years.Playing football is my passion and soccer ground is the place where I feel most alive. Watching Messi and Ronaldo play for their country and win trophies for their respective country motivates me to do something for our country too.

While

walking on the street I just got hit by an unknown car and I had an accident on Simcoe Street yesterday. Now luckily, It's just only one leg that got damaged and the doctor advised me to rest for the next 2 months. I shall be back as soon as after 2 months I have an appointment with the doctor and he will

further

advise if I need

further

treatment or not. I am sure I shall be able to get him on his feet very soon. I am sure I shall be able to get on my feet very soon. Yours Truly, Avi Bhadiyadra

Submitted by avibhadiyadra on Wed Apr 17 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Try to use a variety of sentence structures to enhance clarity and interest.

coherence cohesion

Consider organizing your thoughts more cohesively by clearly signaling when you are transitioning from one point to another.

task achievement

Ensure your reasons for leaving, your love for the team, and your plans for return are clearly and thoroughly explained.

coherence cohesion

Be cautious with repetition; strive to express your points more concisely to avoid redundancy.

task achievement

The letter effectively communicates the main points required by the task.

task achievement

Your expression of affection for soccer and your team adds a personal touch that enhances the letter's emotional appeal.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter, including greeting and closing, follows the conventions of a personal letter, contributing to its overall coherence.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Get your IELTS Essential Vocabulary List —

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

220 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that schools should only focus on teaching academic subjects and preparing students for formal exams. I completely disagree and would argue that practical life skills should be taught as well.
<4
band
Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. others believe that every individuals responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Lots of individuals agree with that the authorities in each country have to preserve the environment. Other experts believe that people manage to make airs and oxygen healthy.
4.5
band
In many countries, governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?
In recent year, public have various of social issues which are very complex had to be resolved by the government and governments are investing new technologies to deal with them. This happening because public services for citizens and public services investment is needed so use government money also a good way to improve people living standard.
7.5
band
Population are growing in cities rapidly. What are the effects of it. What solution can you give to maintain a goood quality of life in urban cities.
Nowadays, more and more individuals tend to live in more developed cities. While the issue of urbanization leads to poor quality of life and air pollution, It could be solved by improving levels of life in the countryside.
5
band
How do you reuse old towels? Discuss your opinion and reasons behind it
Nowadays, fewer and fewer people write letters to communicate to each other. Society considers this type of communication outdated, and I am going to describe this tendency in this essay.

You are a football player, but you have to leave the team for a while, write a letter to your team-mate and say: - why you have to leave, - how much you love the football team, - when you are coming back.

The Closing

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. others believe that every individuals responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In many countries, governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Population are growing in cities rapidly. What are the effects of it. What solution can you give to maintain a goood quality of life in urban cities.

How do you reuse old towels? Discuss your opinion and reasons behind it