Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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private cars and keep safe them. In conclusion, In many cities ,we need
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vehicle-free days
  • public transport
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • sustainable
  • healthier lifestyles
  • obesity
  • foot traffic
  • community engagement
  • logistical challenges
  • banning vehicles
  • supply chain issues
  • pedestrian-friendly
  • urban planning
  • environmental benefits
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