The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart compares the average sales of two bakeries which are Lovely Loaves
and Bernie’s Buns
on Saturday in London in 2010. The graph represents their sales including: doughnuts
and toasted sandwiches
as well as
cookies
and another five types of bread.
Overall
, it can be seen that Berine’s
Bun's bakery is generally the most popular and busiest bakery. In six items, Berine’s
Buns
bakery sold more than Lovely Loaves
. On the whole, toasted sandwiches
, and salads as well as
fresh loaves
were not as popular as sweet items, such
as doughnuts
, cookies
and cakes.
In terms of Berine’s
Buns
, doughnuts
were at the top of the list at just under 140. Cookies
and cakes are the next best sellers on Saturday, with around 115 and 100. Berine’s
Buns
rolls were not as quite as popular crips, moreover
at approximately 78. Fresh Loves was sold exactly at 40 which is sixth place
. Finally
, bottom of the list is a salad which was not as well-liked as toasted sandwiches
with just under 20 and over 20.
As regards Lovely Loaves
, doughnuts
were in first place
like Bernie’s Buns
in the first place
that were not equal, in fact, Bernie’s Buns
in Doughnuts
was more well-liked than Lovely Loaves
. In order, cakes and cookies
are in second and third place
with about 77 and 66, rolls
and fresh Correct word choice
and rolls
loaves
are exactly equal at about 45. In the end, the last
one on the list is toasted sandwiches
with just under 20.Submitted by hoseinyasemi.ir on
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