The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart presents how ready-meal
noodles
are produced in a factory.
Overall
, analyzing the given data, there are 4 main stages. The process begins with making, shaping, frying, and finishing with packaging.
In the first stage, flour stored in silos is transferred to the factory. Next,
it is mixed with water and oil in a mixer to form a dough. Then
, the dough is rolled into sheets through rollers before it is sliced into strips through a machine and formed into discs using shaping equipment.
Once, the noodles
in the shape of discs are fried in oil, they go through the drying process. This
process is needed before the following stage, which is the packaging. A set of cups will be ready to combine the noodles
, vegetables, and spices. After that, the cups are labelled and sealed. Finally
, the pre-packaged noodles
are ready for sale.Submitted by subin12260 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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