Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that it is the best
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to learn a
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through learning its
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. I partly disagree with
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globalization era, some languages are already out of touch with their
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. Different countries are using
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language
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as their official languages
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as English and Spanish.
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, America, India, and Australia all of them are using English to converse.
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, the difference in their
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is extremely obvious. It is hard to understand Indian
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through learning English.
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is because
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of
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is a tool to communicate, and it does not necessarily include local
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, learning
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from their
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is inefficient, which needs to start from scratch. You might spend over 500 hours learning their basic vocabulary, grammar, and accent.
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, it is only
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that you might understand the cultural meanings inherent in the
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those people who don’t have
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talent might give up along the
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, learning
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from their
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still is one of the possible methods. Because some languages reflect cultural values and their history. Chinese,
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, has a long history. The stories in Chinese idioms reflect the history of changing dynasties, and the meanings of the
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include early social ideas like Confucianism. Each character even has its own unique story. In conclusion, I would disagree that
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is the best
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to learn
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because it is an indirect
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to learn
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,
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I agree that
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could be one of the methods to learn
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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