The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line chart compares the carbon dioxide
emissions
Use synonyms
per head in four different countries throughout four decades, from 1967 to 2007. The countries include the United
Kingdom
Use synonyms
,
Sweden
Use synonyms
, Italy, and Portugal. In general, carbon dioxide
emissions
Use synonyms
in Italy and Portugal rocketed up
while
Linking Words
the United
Kingdom
Use synonyms
and
Sweden
Use synonyms
decreased. On top of that, the United
Kingdom
Use synonyms
always had the highest metrics throughout the given time.
Similarly
Linking Words
, Italy and Portugal had a small contribution to CO2
emissions
Use synonyms
in the first year. In 1967, Italy's emission value was 4
tonnes
Use synonyms
, but it went up roughly to about 8
tonnes
Use synonyms
ten years later.
However
Linking Words
, it managed to slightly drop to around 7.5
tonnes
Use synonyms
in the
last
Linking Words
period. Same case as Italy, Portugal was the lowest country in terms of CO2
emissions
Use synonyms
, starting with only more than 1.5
tonnes
Use synonyms
,
then
Linking Words
gradually reaching its peak at nearly 4.5
tonnes
Use synonyms
, and
finally
Linking Words
, it was stable at that value until the
last
Linking Words
year.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, the United
Kingdom
Use synonyms
and
Sweden
Use synonyms
managed to lower the number of
emissions
Use synonyms
. The United
Kingdom
Use synonyms
showed a steady fall from the highest with approximately 11
tonnes
Use synonyms
to only 9
tonnes
Use synonyms
in 2007. Despite a little bounce from 8 to over 10
tonnes
Use synonyms
in the first decade,
Sweden
Use synonyms
was able to decline the trend as well, to being the least emission country
at the end
Linking Words
of the period with around 5
tonnes
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by evaagustine11 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: