The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart compares the carbon dioxide
emissions
per head in four different countries throughout four decades, from 1967 to 2007. The countries include the United
Kingdom
,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal. In general, carbon dioxide
emissions
in Italy and Portugal rocketed up
while
the United
Kingdom
and
Sweden
decreased. On top of that, the United
Kingdom
always had the highest metrics throughout the given time.
Similarly
, Italy and Portugal had a small contribution to CO2
emissions
in the first year. In 1967, Italy's emission value was 4
tonnes
, but it went up roughly to about 8
tonnes
ten years later.
However
, it managed to slightly drop to around 7.5
tonnes
in the
last
period. Same case as Italy, Portugal was the lowest country in terms of CO2
emissions
, starting with only more than 1.5
tonnes
,
then
gradually reaching its peak at nearly 4.5
tonnes
, and
finally
, it was stable at that value until the
last
year.
On the contrary
, the United
Kingdom
and
Sweden
managed to lower the number of
emissions
. The United
Kingdom
showed a steady fall from the highest with approximately 11
tonnes
to only 9
tonnes
in 2007. Despite a little bounce from 8 to over 10
tonnes
in the first decade,
Sweden
was able to decline the trend as well, to being the least emission country
at the end
of the period with around 5
tonnes
.
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