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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per persion in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The provided chart depicts
mean
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 carbon dioxide
emmissions
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emissions
 to each individual in four countries, including
United
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the United
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 Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal
in
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from
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 1967 to 2007. The trend of the given chart are gradual increase
of
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in
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 Italy and Portugal,
gradual
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a gradual
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declinement
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decline
of
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United
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the United
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 Kingdom, and volatility
of
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in
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Sweden
. At the start of the time frame, Italy and Portugal
has
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 the least amount of air pollution emissions
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around 4 and 1.5
tonnes
 respectively. Both
emmissions
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emissions
 skyrocketed in 1977 to about 6
tonnes
 in Italy and 2
tonnes
 in Portugal.
Furthermore
, those countries
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 increased gradually and reached around 7
tonnes
 in Italy and 5
tonnes
 in Portugal.
United
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The United
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 Kingdom and
Sweden
 showed
similar
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a similar
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trend
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trends
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 by having
a
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lower
emmissions
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emissions
at
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in
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the
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2007, compared to 1967.
However
,
Sweden
's CO2 production surged between 1967 and 1977,
with
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 approximately 8
tonnes
 to 10
tonnes
.
Furthermore
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Furthermore,
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 it decreased gradually and reached around 6
tonnes
at the end
 of the time frame.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 4 times.
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