In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?
Nowadays in some
countries
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countries,
people
have become more obese while
in
contrast
their health Add a comma
contrast,
have
significantly decreased. Change the verb form
has
This
is due to
the fact that fast food
and unhealthy eating habits
have become common among individuals. It can be dealt with in different ways like promoting and educating people
on following a healthy diet.
I would argue the main reason for obesity is the fact that fast food
has become more common and easily accessible for people
. Fast food
joints have made their food
cheaper, faster and convenient for people
to have it on the go. For instance
, a busy employe
with time Correct your spelling
employee
constrains
opts to eat KFC for lunch over Correct your spelling
constraints
home cooked
healthy Add a hyphen
home-cooked
food
due to
the fact that its
readily available and he does not have to go through the hustle of preparing it, Correct your spelling
it is
hence
can lead to putting on unnecessary weight.
To cope up
with Change preposition
apply
this
problem there are a
several solutions. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Firstly
, influencing people
to eat healthy and incorporating
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incorporate
workout
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workouts
in
their daily routine. Change preposition
into
Secondly
, companies should recognize and appreciate employee with healthy lifestyle
and reward them with a raise, Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
this
can motivate everyone in the company to improve their habits
. Finally
, people
should be educated with
the paramount importance of a healthy lifestyle and the complications that weight gain can lead to. Change preposition
about
For example
, in a survey conducted by The Times of India, 75% of employees improved their eating habits
after the company introduced increase
in pay for Add an article
an increase
people
who bring home cooked
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home-cooked
food
for lunch.
In conclusion, healthy eating habits
and working out can prevent significant
amount of Add an article
a significant
people
from increasing weight which will take a toll on their healthy
later in life.Replace the word
health
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