Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

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from the countryside moving to large cities are not rare in the modern world.

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prevalent phenomenon may lead to a lot of consequences.

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, these effects are now existing in urban areas. In

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essay, I will discuss it clearly.

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with, there is one main reason causing the trend of migration to cities,

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a large opportunity of looking for a job there.

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reason, there are so many

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choosing to go away from their hometown to settle in a

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with the hope of getting a better job and a higher salary.

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to money, owing to the lack of good universities and facilities in rural areas,

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, students are

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one of the major

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who want to live in metropolitan areas, cite an example, there are roughly more than 5,000 students from other provinces applying to urban universities. So, most reasons come from the long for opportunities to have a better life.

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brings along many present effects on the life of the

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. First and foremost is the lack of accommodation,

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there are so many

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living in the same place, the demand for a living place becomes larger,

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the price will go up, and

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, it gradually becomes unaffordable for most

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. Not only accommodation be affected, but

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facilities be influent, with a quite thick density of citizens, roads, hospitals, and schools can not

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all the

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, in my country, roads in large cities usually have to encounter traffic jams in rush hours, have to wait in

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, or struggle to occupy a space in school which all stem from a large demand of migration. In conclusion,

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the hope of getting rid of being poor, there are so many

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looking for jobs or opportunities for promotion in their careers. So, nowadays

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dwellers have to face a lot of difficulties

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as the lack of accommodation or facilities that can not

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all demands.

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rural depopulation
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overpopulation
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