The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014
The charts below portray various
countries
that had the most consumer spending on travel in 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
all ten countries
share the same patterns; the country with the highest proportion of travel costs belongs to China, and the country with the least
percentage is Taiwan.
At first glance, it is shown that Correct word choice
lowest
travelers
who chose China spent more than $100 billion in 2014, and as can be seen, Germany and the United States are placed in the second stage. Change the spelling
travellers
In addition
to these three money-making countries
in the tourism and travel industry, the United Kingdom occupies the third place, and people who chose it spent around $50 billion.
On the other hand
, there are some countries
that are classified into lower-cost categories, for instance
, Malaysia and Singapore. However
, these countries
have nearly 20 billion users, but in comparison with the rest, they are placed in a lower position and are considered the last
countries
among these ten.Submitted by rahaaa1325 on
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