The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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the years of the citizens of
Yemen
and Italy and the future for 2050. First with reference to the beginning of the century consider the data from
Yemen
.  Half the people are in the  young age group, most of the rest are in the
middle
one and a small amount in the oldest. 
While
in Italy, nearly 
two thirds
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of the inhabitants come from the adult age group, a quarter from the pre-adult one and the rest from the senior one. Moving on to the
middle
of the
21
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21st
century, for
Yemen
the proportions are about
fifty seven
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,
thirty seven
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and six for age groups
middle
, youngest and oldest respectively. In summary, in both
countries
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the largest changes are predicted for the
middle
ages The smallest increase is likely to be seniors in
Yemen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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