The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in three countries are most concerned about.
The given pie charts illustrate information on
of
the three environmental issues which Change preposition
apply
is
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are
people
more concern
about in 3 different Replace the word
concerned
country
. Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, people
from Zambia
and Singapore is
more concerned about Correct subject-verb agreement
are
overpopulation
, while
in Cameroon people
worried
about Add a missing verb
are worried
waste
disposal. In all three countries
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countries,
pollution
is the least concerning among all other categories of issues, but in Zambia
the least place is Add a comma
Zambia,
also
waste
disposal.
According to
the charts, in Singapore
there is the highest Add a comma
Singapore,
percentage
of people
who concerned
about Add a missing verb
are concerned
overpopulation
with
37%, followed by global warming Change preposition
at
with
26%. Change preposition
at
Waste
disposal figures accounted for 21% of Singaporean people
, while
the lowest percentage
of people
worried about pollution
with 16%. In Zambia
there is Add a comma
Zambia,
the
similar trend, Correct article usage
a
overpopulation
and global warming experienced the most
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highest
percentage
with 43% and 29$, respectively. However
, In Zambia
, waste
disposal and pollution
has
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
have
percentage
of 14%.
In contrast
, In Cameroon
the highest Add a comma
Cameroon,
concerning
among Replace the word
concern
people
is waste
disposal with 42%, followed by overpopulation
with 23%. Global warming has the figure at 19%, and pollution
is the least concern among Cameroonian
with 16%.Fix the agreement mistake
Cameroonians
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