The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in three countries are most concerned about.
The given pie charts illustrate information on
of
the three environmental issues which Change preposition
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is
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are
people
more Use synonyms
concern
about in 3 different Replace the word
concerned
country
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countries
Overall
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people
from Use synonyms
Zambia
and Singapore Use synonyms
is
more concerned about Correct subject-verb agreement
are
overpopulation
, Use synonyms
while
in Cameroon Linking Words
people
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worried
about Add a missing verb
are worried
waste
disposal. In all three Use synonyms
countries
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countries,
pollution
is the least concerning among all other categories of issues, but in Use synonyms
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Zambia
the least place is Add a comma
Zambia,
also
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waste
disposal.
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According to
the charts, in Linking Words
Singapore
there is the highest Add a comma
Singapore,
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
concerned
about Add a missing verb
are concerned
overpopulation
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with
37%, followed by global warming Change preposition
at
with
26%. Change preposition
at
Waste
disposal figures accounted for 21% of Singaporean Use synonyms
people
, Use synonyms
while
the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
worried about Use synonyms
pollution
with 16%. In Use synonyms
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Zambia
there is Add a comma
Zambia,
the
similar trend, Correct article usage
a
overpopulation
and global warming experienced the Use synonyms
most
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highest
percentage
with 43% and 29$, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, In Linking Words
Zambia
, Use synonyms
waste
disposal and Use synonyms
pollution
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has
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
have
percentage
of 14%.
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In contrast
, In Linking Words
Cameroon
the highest Add a comma
Cameroon,
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concern
people
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waste
disposal with 42%, followed by Use synonyms
overpopulation
with 23%. Global warming has the figure at 19%, and Use synonyms
pollution
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Cameroonian
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