The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph gives data on how many
shops
were closed and opened in a country over seven
Correct determiner usage
a
years
period.
Correct your spelling
seven-year
Overall
, both closed and opened shops
decreased in numbers with some fluctuations over time. A further
additional point is that in 2011 shops
were opened more, but in 2018, there were more closed shops
rather than opened ones.
As the graph shows, the amount of shop closures started at almost 6,200 in 2011 followed by a small increase to around 7,100 in 2013. Afterwards, it experienced a slight decline to above 5,000 in 2018. However
, this
figure hitted
a low point at under 1,000 in 2015.
Regarding shop openings, If we look at the numbers, the trend Correct your spelling
hit
was
very different. There were opened nearly 8,500 Wrong verb form
is
shops
in 2011. After that, there was a quick fall to almost 4,000 in 2012 followed by a gradual rise to around 6100 in 2014. And
Correct word choice
Then
then
, openings went down to exactly 4,000 in 2015 and 2016 before witnessing steady
drop to 3,000 in 2018, respectively.Correct article usage
a steady
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