The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
The bar charts below illustrate a comparison between the number of deaths
due to
strokes
such
as AIDS, leprosy and malaria, in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding assigned to these diseases. To commence with, the lowest number of deaths are caused by an illness called leprosy about 0,2 sum people struggled with
this
and over 80 million dollars were related to dealing with
this
catastrophe.
Also
, the highest ranked cause of the dying is tuberculosis, because approximately 1,8 billion individuals are dead now,
hence
30 million were given to cure
this
problem. Even if malaria was funded with a good deal of payment(50 trillion), it did not show a great result, because 0,4 thousand died. And other harsh circumstances like tropical infection and diarrhoea justified themselves, as they were not funded with a big money.
It is clear that
,
according to
medical research in Someland, AIDS was well-paid, in the meantime TB was not.
In addition
, Leprosy and tropical diseases were paid equally. The only wealth which was spent on tuberculosis was not proved, even if only
this
one was paid fairly, at the same time others were justified with a smaller sum of of funds than TB.
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