The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the three most popular kinds of items that were purchased in a particular bakery in the
year
2014.
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bread
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bread
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Bread
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Pies
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Bread
in the particular barkery store fluctuated and reached a high of $65,000. From June onwards of the Use synonyms
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Pies
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, amount, money, bread, month, pies with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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