The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the survey results of two different types of
respondents
, namely undergraduate and postgraduate about variations of books and online
materials
in their school library. The data were measured in percentages.
Overall
, there were different results in the survey. The
majority
of
respondents
in the undergraduate felt happy about the range of books and online
materials
,
while
the postgraduate student
respondents
, the
majority
of them chose not good for non-print
materials
. Looking at the range of books charts, the undergraduate students responded 37% for very good, followed by satisfied (35%) and 28 per cent for not good. Meanwhile, the postgraduate
respondents
felt not good as the highest result (50%).
Additionally
, the satisfied and very good follow the result (28% and 22%, respectively). Turning to the printed
materials
chart, the undergraduate students felt very good as the
majority
(68 per cent) results, followed by satisfied with a fifth of the total percentage and not good response (12%). Meanwhile, the postgraduate had a different result. The
majority
of them were dissatisfied with the
materials
with 62%. The proportion for satisfied and very good follow in order (22% and 16 %).
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