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The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts show the survey results of two different types of
respondents
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, namely undergraduate and postgraduate about variations of books and online
materials
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 in their school library. The data were measured in percentages.
Overall
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, there were different results in the survey. The
majority
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 of
respondents
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 in the undergraduate felt happy about the range of books and online
materials
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,
while
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 the postgraduate student
respondents
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, the
majority
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 of them chose not good for non-print
materials
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. Looking at the range of books charts, the undergraduate students responded 37% for very good, followed by satisfied (35%) and 28 per cent for not good. Meanwhile, the postgraduate
respondents
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 felt not good as the highest result (50%).
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, the satisfied and very good follow the result (28% and 22%, respectively). Turning to the printed
materials
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 chart, the undergraduate students felt very good as the
majority
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 (68 per cent) results, followed by satisfied with a fifth of the total percentage and not good response (12%). Meanwhile, the postgraduate had a different result. The
majority
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 of them were dissatisfied with the
materials
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 with 62%. The proportion for satisfied and very good follow in order (22% and 16 %).

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words respondents, materials, majority with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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