The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart depicts the proportion of
people
from Jamestown who used social media in five different
age
groups in the year 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that a large majority of the digital platform
users
were under 35
years
old, whilst the amount of
users
in other
age
groups
were
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much smaller.
To begin
with, up to three-quarters of social platform
users
were under 35
years
old.
People
with in
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between
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the range of 13 and 25
years
old made up two-fifths,
while
users
between the ages of 26 and 35 generated more than a third of the digital platform
users
.
To
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contrast,
people
of the other three
age
groups only accounted for a quarter of the total
users
. Only 15
percent
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per cent
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of the
users
were
people
aged 36 to 45.
Similarly
, the proportion of
people
who used social media was as low as 8
percent
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per cent
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for the
users
that were 46 to 55
years
old.
People
over the
age
of 55 accounted for a very small proportion.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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