The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart depicts the proportion of
people
from Jamestown who used social media in five different age
groups in the year 2018. Overall
, it can be seen that a large majority of the digital platform users
were under 35 years
old, whilst the amount of users
in other age
groups were
much smaller.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
To begin
with, up to three-quarters of social platform users
were under 35 years
old. People
with in
the range of 13 and 25 Change preposition
between
years
old made up two-fifths, while
users
between the ages of 26 and 35 generated more than a third of the digital platform users
.
To
contrast, Change preposition
In
people
of the other three age
groups only accounted for a quarter of the total users
. Only 15 percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
users
were people
aged 36 to 45. Similarly
, the proportion of people
who used social media was as low as 8 percent
for the Change the spelling
per cent
users
that were 46 to 55 years
old. People
over the age
of 55 accounted for a very small proportion.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, users, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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