The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
in connection with a fault in garbage collection equipment due to
which rubbish waste
is piled up in the indra street. There is leakage in the rubbish or garbage collection system, and as a result
, liquid waste
is gathered in the neighbourhood. Moreover
, Collecting the waste
is problematic because the system is inoperative.
Due to
this
issue, me and my neighbours have to face a lot of problems. The street is piled up with water and causes inconvenience to the area natives, in addition
to it, the collection of waste
becomes the reason bad smell. Children and elders are unable to go outside due to
slippery conditions. This
accumulation of waste
in a large amount becomes home to the insects and flies which will be further
responsible for many diseases.
I suggest you clean the area manually with the help of labourers and spray the whole area to kill the insects. After that, the garbage system should repaired.
I hope you will consider my suggestion and take the necessary actions in this
regard. Looking forward to hearing from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
NainaSubmitted by Kirandeepkaur on
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task achievement
Include a brief introduction about yourself in relation to the situation for a more clear context.
coherence and cohesion
Try to variate your sentence structures to improve readability and flow.
coherence and cohesion
Enhance cohesion by connecting your ideas more smoothly using linking words or phrases.
task response
You have effectively communicated the problem and its effects.
task achievement
Your polite tone and appropriate closing were well done, contributing to the suitable writing tone.
coherence and cohesion
You logically organized the letter, dedicating paragraphs to each task component.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite