The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart depicts the data collected ,in 2016, in the number and percentage of
Internet
users in different
countries
such
as China, India, the U.S., Brazil, Japan, Russia, Nigeria, Germany, the U.K. and Mexico.
Overall
, China was at the top
position
and Mexico was at the bottom
position
in the data collected. The country, whose almost population were using the
internet
was the U.K., 92.6%, but
according to
the
position
, the U.K. was the second
last
country from the bottom. China was at the top
position
and 52.2%
Chinese
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of Chinese
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were using the
Internet
.
However
, the percentage of
internet
users in Japan was
also
very high,
that is
91.1%, and the
position
of Japan was fifth.
While
the
countries
whose data were very low compared with other
countries
in terms of
internet
use were, Mexico, Nigeria and India. Here, India was top second country
while
only 34.8% of the total population was using the
Internet
. The U.S. was third ,but 88.5% population were using the
internet
, which was quite more than other
countries
.
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