The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart depicts the data collected ,in 2016, in the number and percentage of
Internet
users in different countries
such
as China, India, the U.S., Brazil, Japan, Russia, Nigeria, Germany, the U.K. and Mexico. Overall
, China was at the top position
and Mexico was at the bottom position
in the data collected.
The country, whose almost population were using the internet
was the U.K., 92.6%, but according to
the position
, the U.K. was the second last
country from the bottom. China was at the top position
and 52.2% Chinese
were using the Change preposition
of Chinese
Internet
. However
, the percentage of internet
users in Japan was also
very high, that is
91.1%, and the position
of Japan was fifth.
While
the countries
whose data were very low compared with other countries
in terms of internet
use were, Mexico, Nigeria and India. Here, India was top second country while
only 34.8% of the total population was using the Internet
. The U.S. was third ,but 88.5% population were using the internet
, which was quite more than other countries
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