The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart depicts the data collected ,in 2016, in the number and percentage of
Internet
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users in different
countries
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such
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as China, India, the U.S., Brazil, Japan, Russia, Nigeria, Germany, the U.K. and Mexico.
Overall
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, China was at the top
position
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and Mexico was at the bottom
position
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in the data collected. The country, whose almost population were using the
internet
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was the U.K., 92.6%, but
according to
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the
position
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, the U.K. was the second
last
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country from the bottom. China was at the top
position
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and 52.2%
Chinese
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of Chinese
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were using the
Internet
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.
However
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, the percentage of
internet
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users in Japan was
also
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very high,
that is
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91.1%, and the
position
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of Japan was fifth.
While
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the
countries
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whose data were very low compared with other
countries
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in terms of
internet
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use were, Mexico, Nigeria and India. Here, India was top second country
while
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only 34.8% of the total population was using the
Internet
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. The U.S. was third ,but 88.5% population were using the
internet
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, which was quite more than other
countries
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, countries, position with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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