Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen A nice, respectful style
Hello July, I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and in the best of spirits. I am writing to express a concern over
your dog Milo. Recently, my mother Change preposition
for
had
brought Unnecessary verb
apply
couple
of plants from California for our garden. Change the article
a couple
Moreover
, the palnts
are rare to find in our locality. Correct your spelling
plants
Hence
, we are taking extra care of the plants. Further
to this
, it has been known to you that we also
adore Milo like our own puppy. While
I was returning home, I have
found her in the garden. As soon as I noticed her, I Unnecessary verb
apply
run
towards the backyard but he had already destroyed two of the Wrong verb form
ran
palnts
.
Correct your spelling
plants
However
, It would be highly appreciatable, if you keep
away your puppy from our garden for at least two months. I hope you understand my concern and take proper Wrong verb form
kept
actions
regarding Fix the agreement mistake
action
this
.
Let me know if you need my suggestion, I am always here to help you out. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your neighbour,
LisaSubmitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and sticks to it to avoid mixing different issues in the same paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Add a more precise greeting at the beginning and a suitable closing phrase to better frame your letter.
task achievement
Clarify your requests and provide specific examples or solutions to support your reasons for writing.
task achievement
Keep a consistent and respectful writing tone throughout the letter, ensuring politeness even when expressing grievances.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,