The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feutures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of
visitors
visiting a Caribbean island
and their preference on
accommodation from 2010 to 2017.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visitors
in
Caribbean Change preposition
to
Island
was increase
steadily throughout Wrong verb form
increased
7 years
period. Between Correct your spelling
the 7-year
two
Correct article usage
the two
accommodation
, expenditure Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
in
staying on Change preposition
on
cruise
ship
rose significantly over Fix the agreement mistake
ships
years
but fluctuated in staying onCorrect article usage
the years
Add an article
the
island
. Despite this
, the total amount of visitors
that flowed into staying onAdd an article
the
island
was higher than a
Change preposition
on a
cruise
.
Accommodation on the island
received over five hundred visitors
between 2010 and 2011, which then
rose significantly to approximately 1. 5 million
in 2013 and has not changed until 2016. After remained
constant, there was aWrong verb form
remaining
slightly
drop in 2016 before rose back to 1. 5 Change the adverb
slight
million
again in 2017.
In 2010, visitors
that stayed on the cruise
reached just less than five hundred visitors
, eventually the numbers rose to five hundred visitors
in 2011 and then
falling
back to 2010 levels in 2012. Following 2012 there was a significant resurgence that Wrong verb form
fell
reach
a high point Wrong verb form
reached
to
2 Change preposition
of
million
of
Change preposition
apply
visitors
in 2017.
In conclusion, the total tourist
that come to Fix the agreement mistake
number of tourists
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Fix the agreement mistake
Islands
Island
has a stable growth from 2010 until 2017 and has not collapsed. Therefore
, 2016 and 2017 was
the only Correct subject-verb agreement
were
years
Change to a genitive case
year's
years'
cruise
levels of visitors
exceeded the island
's, with values over 2 million
and
respectively.Correct word choice
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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