The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000
The line chart gives information about how
much
Correct quantifier usage
many
hours
spend to make
a Wrong verb form
were spent making
refrigerator
in three business
from 1990 to 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
Overall
, over the one decade, the hours
of Company
A and B have a similar trend and steadly
Correct your spelling
steadily
steady
decline
the Wrong verb form
declined
time
to create a fridge
. In addition
, Company
C shown
Wrong verb form
shows
same
amount of Change the article
the same
time
to make a refrigerator
at the same period.
Turning to the data more in detail, in 1990 Company
A made a refrigerator
while
30 Change preposition
for
hours
and Company
C created a fridge
35
Change preposition
for 35
hours
. However
, in 2000, both of
companies gradually decreased Change preposition
apply
fridge
creation time
approximately
23 Change preposition
by approximately
hours
and 33 hours
respectively.
In contrast
, throughout the period shown in the chart, Company
B maintained equal hours
to make a refrigerator
around 27 hours
between 1990 and 2000. Notably, Company
B were
surpassed the Unnecessary verb
apply
time
to create a fridge
by Company
A middle of betwwen
1990 and 2000.Correct your spelling
between
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, refrigerator, company, time, fridge with synonyms.
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