The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000

The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000
The line chart gives information about how
much
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hours
spend to make
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were spent making
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a
refrigerator
in three
business
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businesses
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from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, over the one decade, the
hours
of
Company
A and B have a similar trend and
steadly
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steadily
steady
decline
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declined
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the
time
to create a
fridge
.
In addition
,
Company
C
shown
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shows
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same
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the same
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amount of
time
to make a
refrigerator
at the same period. Turning to the data more in detail, in 1990
Company
A made a
refrigerator
while
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for
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30
hours
and
Company
C created a
fridge
35
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for 35
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hours
.
However
, in 2000, both
of
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apply
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companies gradually decreased
fridge
creation
time
approximately
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by approximately
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23
hours
and 33
hours
respectively.
In contrast
, throughout the period shown in the chart,
Company
B maintained equal
hours
to make a
refrigerator
around 27
hours
between 1990 and 2000. Notably,
Company
B
were
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surpassed the
time
to create a
fridge
by
Company
A middle of
betwwen
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between
1990 and 2000.
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