The graph below shows the price of bananas in four different countries from 1996 to 2004.

The graph below shows the price of bananas in four different countries from 1996 to 2004.
The line chart illustrates how many bananas were sold in US Dollars per
kg
in four various countries between 1996 and 2004.
Overall
, both
Japan
and
France
started and ended at the same time with hitting the top of the chart in both years. Whilst, the United States reported the least sales. In 1996,
Japan
and
France
both topped the year. After that,
Japan
started to rise sharply with a peak at 3 US dollars per
kg
in 1998 and
then
it fluctuated and stopped at 2.
While
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France
remained stable until 1998 and declined from 2 to 1.5 US dollars per
kg
in 1999 and after it rose again and ended at the same rate as
Japan
.
Furthermore
, Germany was the only country
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started to decline but
then
continued to grow in an upward direction and crossed
the
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France
in 1997 and reached
at
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2.6 us per
kg
in 1998.
However
, from there it
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and came
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that position where they took a high jump. And the
last
one was the USA with a fluctuating trend and it stopped at almost 1.5 US per
kg
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kg, japan, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparative price trends
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • significant price fluctuations
  • dramatic rise/fall
  • comparisons
  • highest/lowest prices
  • potential reasons
  • economic conditions
  • import/export taxes
  • agricultural policies
  • external factors
  • natural disasters
  • trade agreements
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