You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the inconvenience I am having with my room colleague and to request assistance in finding a better place for me.
My current setup consists of a medium-sized shared bedroom that is
inhabited by me and another student from the Civil Engineering course. He stays out for most part of the day while
I am at my desk making my assignments or studying for exams.
The issue I am having is that he comes back late at night and often makes a lot of noise, which compromises my sleep quality. Additionally
, he calls his friends over during weekends and they listen to loud music, making it impossible for me to concentrate on my studies.
Finally
, the type of dormitory that would suit me best would be a single bedroom. However
, if that is
not available at the moment, I would like to share the room with someone who is also
focused on academic matters.
I appreciate your attention to solving the situation and I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Amanda LagoSubmitted by amandacflago23 on
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