Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.

Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.
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The maps illustrate the changes in the layout of
Pentland
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the Pentland
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coastal town from 1950 to 2007.
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, It is evident that it drastically changed from an industrial and grassland area in 1950 to a residential spot in 2007, with many new constructions. Looking at the details, On the east
side
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of the town, over the 57-year-period, a grassland and an industrial area placed in the north of the
road
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, changed to
a
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parking with a number of shops, a park , and a swimming pool next to it.
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, a cinema was constructed on the southern
side
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of the
road
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in 2007, in a place which was a land full of grass in 1950.
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, in the area of grassland on the northeast
side
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, 5 shops were built next to the
road
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and 3 apartment buildings were erected on the northern
side
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just next to the coast.
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, a bunch of houses were made on the south
side
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of the plan with a new
road
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in the middle to access them. It is note mentioning that a yacht marina was located in the sea which is on the north
side
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of the town, And all These are connected through 2 main roads and a few sub-roads.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coastal town
  • layout
  • undeveloped
  • infrastructure
  • landmarks
  • rural
  • significant changes
  • tourist attractions
  • residential areas
  • housing estates
  • tourism-driven economy
  • green spaces
  • beachfront properties
  • coastline
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic growth
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