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In some citites and towns all over the world ,the high volume of traffic is a problem.what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem.

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The problem of high
traffic
 jams occurs in several cities and towns all around the world. There are existing difficulties in urbanization that need efficient and immediate solutions. Obviously, the problem of high-volume
traffic
 affects thousands of people in their everyday lives in
world
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 in general.It can be clearly seen that
,
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 the core of
this
 matter happens
to begin
 with city structures and insufficient management of vehicle commute around metropolice.
Also
, it is worth discussing how many unnecessary stoppages and
traffic
 light systems are built
in particular
 directions which lead rush hours into
the
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 nightmare
of
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 everyone. On top of the existing complexity of road structuring, the transport preference of society makes a huge difference,
while
 separating those who use public transport and lightweight vehicles. It is possible to say that,in order to make better and smoother operations in cities and towns for the next few years , reconstruction and replacement of routes ,
as well as
, constructing alternative and a wide range of highway sections will be undeniable necessities.The speed limit should be
main
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concerns
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 of
traffic
, since it should provide exact progress on each way.
Last
 but not least, timely changes should be done on time to prevent the probability of the emissivity of the road. In conclusion, fixation of
traffic
 structure should done more sufficiently and should prevent any risks for upcoming problems.
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Try to directly address the question in the introduction by stating the causes of high traffic volumes and suggesting possible solutions more explicitly.
coherence cohesion
Enhance cohesion by using a wider range of connectives and topic sentences that clearly signal the main idea of each paragraph.
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Include more specific examples and case studies to support your arguments and make your essay more persuasive.
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You provided a clear overview of the problem and introduced potential solutions effectively.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion succinctly summarises the main points of your essay, reinforcing your stance.

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