Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government showed focus on reducing enviromental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that

government

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the government

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showed

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paid

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attention to

reduce

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reducing

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the polluted

enviroment

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environment

and

properties

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property

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problems

to avoid

disease

and illness.

This

writer

agree

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agrees

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with the statement that illness and

disease

can be prevented

through

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by

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reducing pollution and housing

problems

due to

the places people live

affect

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affecting

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their

health

and the

enviroment

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environment

is the

sourse

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source

of food and drink for people to consume.

Firstly

, the place you live,

work

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and work

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in has a big impact on your

health

.

This

is true

,

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apply

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because it is the place where you mostly stay in, as it is full of dust, you may have

problems

with

lungs

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your lungs

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and breathing.

Similar

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Similarly

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to

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apply

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that

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apply

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, if the place you live is wet and filthy, you are likely to be infected by some

disease

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diseases

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by insects

such

as mosquitos... .

Thus

,

government

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the government

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improves the working and living

enviroment

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environment

is the right to help you

to

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apply

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prevent

disease

or any other

health

problems

. Moving to

other point

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another point

other points

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that

worth

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is worth

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considering is that saving the

enviroment

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environment

is saving the food and drink that you consume. It is a fact that all the vegetable, meat, water,... comes from

the

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apply

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nature

,

due to

that, if the

nature

or

enviroment

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environment

is polluted, the

thing

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things

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that you consume will be

unsafed

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unsaved

unsafe

safe

as well.

For instance

, when you litter a plastic bag

to

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in

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the ocean, the fish thinks it is food

then

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and then

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eat

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eats

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the bag, that fish may be eaten by many other

fishs

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fishes

fish

,

however

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and

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the

platic

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plastic

bag will eventually go into our dishes as we consume

fishs

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fish

fishes

.

Therefore

,

the

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apply

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nature

is what we consume, so saving

nature

is the way to save ourselves from illness.

To conclude

, the

goverment

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government

shows focus on saving

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the enviroment

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enviroment

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environment

and hosing

problems

is actually helpful for people in order to improve our

health

and prevent

them

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apply

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from

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apply

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disease

and

illess

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illness

because

of

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apply

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the

nature

and house

is

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are

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what we rely on.